'Withheld' Final Edit

Finally, here it is! The final edit of my opening sequence, 'Withheld'. 



I will send out the new and improved questionnaire for my audience feedback later this evening, the results of which I will blog about tomorrow.

Audience Feedback Questionnaire: Final Edit

Here is the questionnaire I am going to send out to the my target audience.  I have asked that they send them back to me by tomorrow evening, at which time I will blog with the results. 

Like in the last questionnaire I sent out, I have asked many open questions, in order to gain the best results. 

Final edit: Soundtrack focus

As said in my previous post, the main amendments I need to make are to that of the music.  I am continuing with the making of my score, which I feel is almost complete.  

I have found a really haunting piece of music that I think works really well for the genre, as it is a subtle but at the same time noticeable. 

Later this week, my opening sequence final edit will be complete, as well as my audience feedback.  After that it's the evaluation, which I'm dreading! 21 minutes of me speaking....